On Aymann Ismail's Blog
http://aymannthesis.blogspot.com/2011/02/thesis-proposal-change.html?showComment=1298325525572#c7164021346735856980
“I like this idea since a person's character and personality is created by views of others. Its interesting to see some of the sources of information and to see which ones you accept and which ones you omit. I think it would be cool if you had an autobiography, but also another screen showing the information you do not agree with. Since a personality is not only built upon a person's supporting views, but opposing views as well. The title "autobiography" in my opinion is a little straight forward, maybe something that explains the project and possibly its process. ”
On Bryan McGinn's Blog
http://bmcginn.tumblr.com/
“Your psychedelic patterns and designs are very interesting and original. What intrigues me the most are the hidden messages. They can be very verbally obscene, yet they are hidden, so the message becomes fluid with the pattern and design. The art is very consistent and I enjoy that you will be putting these designs on t-shirts, it would be the perfect application. One of my suggestions would maybe create a large print on the wall of one of your designs to attract gallery viewers to your area of gallery.”
On Kelly O'Leary’s Blog
http://kellyannoleary.tumblr.com/
“After further learning about Kelly's thesis project, I am very interested in finding out who the person she is following. She is sort of unsure how to present all this data, because there is so much, but ultimately as long as message is conveyed. I gave her the suggestion about maybe making a huge planner/schedule which plots out every movement and location in relation to time. She mentioned maybe making an installation which almost makes it seem like she was a detective, putting images and connecting strings. This seems like a great idea as well because it goes along with her theme of feeling exposed.”
Wednesday, February 23, 2011
Monday, February 7, 2011
Response to other's Critique posts- 2/7/2011
On Danielle Pozsonyi’s Blog
http://daniellepozsonyi.blogspot.com/2011/02/my-critique-response-for-friday-feb-4th.html
“I think your secrets idea is very interesting, since people don’t know the author and the content is sort of vague. But that is the beauty of the project, the ambiguity is very intriguing. I feel the Post-Its actually actually increase the seriousness of the secrets. To me, handwriting is much more impactful because it seems natural; it feels almost as if the individual personally took his/her time to write the secret in person. This may seem slightly cliché, but maybe make your whole project based on Post-its, or something similar, this way you have one consistent system giving equal weight to all secrets.”
On Lauren Morich’s Blog
http://lauven.tumblr.com/post/3016930087/thesis-post-getting-closer#notes
“I really enjoyed your tag idea, its great how you have accumulated many of them. I feel like you’re trying to say that people are more interested in name brands and design of the tag rather than the actual product. Maybe you could take this idea even a step further by creating your own tag design system. Creating tags for the tags, showing that the tags themselves hold a value rather than them being just something to be thrown out… or possibly creating information-graphic providing all the details about each tag, since you have already created the spreadsheet. Overall, no matter how you pursue your thesis idea, as long your main message is conveyed. “
On Kelly O'Leary’s Blog
http://kellyannoleary.tumblr.com/post/3042908067/class-critique-blog-1
“I feel like this is a very current issue—internet and privacy. Facebook and apps such as foursquare are letting everyone know what we are always doing. This could be a good thing, but can easily be taken advantage of. The final outcome of this project seems very promising, I’m excited to see who is being monitored, and also to what extent this individual is revealing his/her life.”
http://daniellepozsonyi.blogspot.com/2011/02/my-critique-response-for-friday-feb-4th.html
“I think your secrets idea is very interesting, since people don’t know the author and the content is sort of vague. But that is the beauty of the project, the ambiguity is very intriguing. I feel the Post-Its actually actually increase the seriousness of the secrets. To me, handwriting is much more impactful because it seems natural; it feels almost as if the individual personally took his/her time to write the secret in person. This may seem slightly cliché, but maybe make your whole project based on Post-its, or something similar, this way you have one consistent system giving equal weight to all secrets.”
On Lauren Morich’s Blog
http://lauven.tumblr.com/post/3016930087/thesis-post-getting-closer#notes
“I really enjoyed your tag idea, its great how you have accumulated many of them. I feel like you’re trying to say that people are more interested in name brands and design of the tag rather than the actual product. Maybe you could take this idea even a step further by creating your own tag design system. Creating tags for the tags, showing that the tags themselves hold a value rather than them being just something to be thrown out… or possibly creating information-graphic providing all the details about each tag, since you have already created the spreadsheet. Overall, no matter how you pursue your thesis idea, as long your main message is conveyed. “
On Kelly O'Leary’s Blog
http://kellyannoleary.tumblr.com/post/3042908067/class-critique-blog-1
“I feel like this is a very current issue—internet and privacy. Facebook and apps such as foursquare are letting everyone know what we are always doing. This could be a good thing, but can easily be taken advantage of. The final outcome of this project seems very promising, I’m excited to see who is being monitored, and also to what extent this individual is revealing his/her life.”
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