On Danielle Pozsonyi’s Blog
http://daniellepozsonyi.blogspot.com/2011/02/my-critique-response-for-friday-feb-4th.html
“I think your secrets idea is very interesting, since people don’t know the author and the content is sort of vague. But that is the beauty of the project, the ambiguity is very intriguing. I feel the Post-Its actually actually increase the seriousness of the secrets. To me, handwriting is much more impactful because it seems natural; it feels almost as if the individual personally took his/her time to write the secret in person. This may seem slightly cliché, but maybe make your whole project based on Post-its, or something similar, this way you have one consistent system giving equal weight to all secrets.”
On Lauren Morich’s Blog
http://lauven.tumblr.com/post/3016930087/thesis-post-getting-closer#notes
“I really enjoyed your tag idea, its great how you have accumulated many of them. I feel like you’re trying to say that people are more interested in name brands and design of the tag rather than the actual product. Maybe you could take this idea even a step further by creating your own tag design system. Creating tags for the tags, showing that the tags themselves hold a value rather than them being just something to be thrown out… or possibly creating information-graphic providing all the details about each tag, since you have already created the spreadsheet. Overall, no matter how you pursue your thesis idea, as long your main message is conveyed. “
On Kelly O'Leary’s Blog
http://kellyannoleary.tumblr.com/post/3042908067/class-critique-blog-1
“I feel like this is a very current issue—internet and privacy. Facebook and apps such as foursquare are letting everyone know what we are always doing. This could be a good thing, but can easily be taken advantage of. The final outcome of this project seems very promising, I’m excited to see who is being monitored, and also to what extent this individual is revealing his/her life.”
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